Villain got quite good sizings both pre and post for a fish tbh.

I don't like raising turn, I would prefer calling turn and x/f river or jam if he checks to us, fish don't rly like to bet/fold. Especially not in 3b pots, and we are getting a good price. Imo we're saying a bunch of money by calling turn and shoving or folding river.

I think it's fine.

The fact that u put Player 1 to 5 and ur name instead of Hero is pretty confusing :P, most people have themselves as HERO and show the names of Villains

Now, if he is a fish, you can start on the flop with the plan of check/folding since his wide range (the range you are valuebetting preflop) hits that flop better than your range does, but i suppose under some circumstances you can justify a Cbet as a thin valuebet from draws and to not allow weaker hands to bluff us (though i doubt this could happen). After that Cbet, on the turn , we stop any aggression unless the Turn gives us top-pair, if it doesn't we check to call turns like the one in the actual hand , or fold turns that don't improve us.

When you call the turn with the flushdraw your plan is to be pretty straight forward on the river. If you don't hit anything just check-fold it, if you hit the 1 card flush lead with it.